Nasvhille Skyline, finished...I think

I'm finally finished with my Nashville Skyline...for refreshers, and just to see the way it evolved, I'll post the photos leading up to the final product

Here's how it started out the other day...



Then mid morning on Thursday, it was looking like this



But I just wasn't quite happy with that...so I kept altering and working on it until I had this

As I was in the driveway spraying it with tripple thick gloss, my neighbor and her son came up and asked me if I could give some art lessons to him after school some days.
Well, of course I can! Except, I've never really had any art lessons myself unless you count high school art which leaves a lot to be desired in Tennessee.... so um...hmmmm...Oh well, I'll figure it out.

Nashville is evolving

There seems to be a theme...shortly following a seizure I want to paint.

This time I started on a Nashville skyline, as seen from the riverfront. I love that view of my hometown, and I especially love the way the lights of the So-Bro District reflect off of the water...

It's still a work in progress, for sure. This one has been nothing if not tedious, but it is a labor of love.

Here's how it started out yesterday



I woke up this morning wanting nothing more than to work on this and pull it together...I'm still not quite happy with it, but I like the direction it's taking. What do you think? What would you suggest?